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  • Obesity is a phenomenon present all over the world.

  • The most frequent disease in our modern life si obesity.
  • Over a billion people in the world are in overweight.
  • This problem is topical and do not depend of social status, living area, age or sex.
  • In economicaly developped countries 50% of population suffers from overweight and 30% from obesity.
  • Every year the number of children and adolescents suffering from obesity growes.
  • We can consider obesity like a global epidemic.
  • People in overweight had more diseases then people with normal weight.
  • The link with obesity and the second type of diabet was prouved.
  • What is the obesity causes ?
  • The cause is the violation of power balance in organism.
  • The power arrievs in our organism with food.
  • If we don't use this power, the excess of calories used for fat synthesis.
  • Gragually the fat grows in our organism and we begin to gaining weiht.
  • In our modern life most people spend the « sedentary life », every day use public transport, lifts, and sitting in offices.
  • We spend a lot of time in front of TV and computer and all this promotes overweight.
  • This disease is the result of 300 000 deaths evary year.
  • The USA guvernment for example spend yearlly 147 billions dollars to fight the obesity and all diseases that are in conscequance of.
  • The damage for ameroican economic is 865 billions dollars.
  • So how to fight this problem ?
  • For prevent it people need to eat rationnally and practice regular sport activity.
  • Besides this they need to live a healthy life, to have a resonable work and rest mode.
  • And the thing that will push to do it is a desire.
  • Desire to change theirs lifes.

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