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  • coke is a drink that is harmful to people. the content of the coke, high in sugar, caffeine, paint materials, phosphoric acid, such as carbon dioxide, are substances which are harmful to health. coke contains calstigi to throw copious amounts of carbon dioxide to the outside of the human body.
  • in 2001 at the university of Delhi "who drink coke a further" the name in competition with 8 liter coke drinker within 10 minutes in front of everyone's eyes died. the cause of death was carbon dioxide poisoning.let me tell you the journey is 1 hour of starch in the human body.
  • first ondakika your blood sugar 10 tsp it enters. this is 100 times that of the normal daily dose. however, you will not have any sickness in the content of starch by phosphoric acid.
  • the first 20 minutes, blood sugar rises to a extreme degree. as a result, excess insulin is secreted more of your pancreas and blood sugar to be stored as fat in the liver begins.
  • caffeine the entire circulation within the first 40 minutes will be entered into.blood pressure rises and passes into the blood by the liver and blood sugar more sugar continues to rise.
  • within 45 minutes the construction of dopamine in the brain increases, it begins with a feeling of happiness.
  • in 60 minutes the sensation of hunger occurs , is the need of coke and eating dessert again. ettiigi continue as long as this vicious cycle, the liver and the belly increases the lubrication of all cells of the body develops resistance and leptin in inssulin.
  • Accelerates the excretion of calcium from the kidneys.
  • Tooth decay increases.
  • Nov binge causes diseases.
  • Sudden blood sugar causes your body to store fat for the misunderstood.

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    • coke is a drink that is harmful to people. the content of the coke, high in sugar, caffeine, paint materials, phosphoric acid, such as carbon dioxide, are substances which are harmful to health. coke contains calstigi to throw copious amounts of carbon dioxide to the outside of the human body.
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    • in 2001 at the university of Delhi "who drink coke a further" the name in competition with 8 liter coke drinker within 10 minutes in front of everyone's eyes died. the cause of death was carbon dioxide poisoning.let me tell you the journey is 1 hour of starch in the human body.
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    • first ondakika your blood sugar 10 tsp it enters. this is 100 times that of the normal daily dose. however, you will not have any sickness in the content of starch by phosphoric acid.
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    • the first 20 minutes, blood sugar rises to a extreme degree. as a result, excess insulin is secreted more of your pancreas and blood sugar to be stored as fat in the liver begins.
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    • caffeine the entire circulation within the first 40 minutes will be entered into.blood pressure rises and passes into the blood by the liver and blood sugar more sugar continues to rise.
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    • in 60 minutes the sensation of hunger occurs , is the need of coke and eating dessert again. ettiigi continue as long as this vicious cycle, the liver and the belly increases the lubrication of all cells of the body develops resistance and leptin in inssulin.
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