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  • Why does somebody goes to college?

  • Attend a college or a university seems a good option for many people because a degree can open many doors in someone's life.
  • A well-educated person is more likely to make good decisions about their own life rather than someone with less instruction.
  • A small business owner who went to the business school have more chance to understand and interpret signals of the market than someone who just decide open a cafeteria and do not understand too much about management, logistics or micro and micro economics.
  • Although, in these days, we can find information about almost everything for free in the internet, colleges and universities continue offering an outstanding quality of education.
  • Have a degree can also help a professional get better positions in their fields when seeking for a job.
  • Most of employees prefer more qualified workers.
  • A degree on a renowned institution can compensate, for example, the lack of experience.
  • Furthermore, during the study years a person can also build their own network with other students and professors.
  • The friendships made in college can be extremely useful on the professional life.
  • Above all, at least in my opinion, is use the diploma as a skill needed to reach some bigger objective.
  • A man who always dreamed about be a doctor and save lives can only accomplish his wishes by attending a college.
  • A girl who wish be an environmental lawyer can only fight for the planet if she had a lawyer degree.
  • Those are just a few reasons why a young student should attend a college, despite the price of tuitions and fees are always raising, many people keep following this path.Attend a college or a university seems a good option for many people because a degree can open many doors in someone's life.
  • A well-educated person is more likely to make good decisions about their own life rather than someone with less instruction.
  • A small business owner who went to the business school have more chance to understand and interpret signals of the market than someone who just decide open a cafeteria and do not understand too much about management, logistics or micro and micro economics.
  • Although, in these days, we can find information about almost everything for free in the internet, colleges and universities continue offering an outstanding quality of education.
  • Have a degree can also help a professional get better positions in their fields when seeking for a job.
  • Most of employees prefer more qualified workers.
  • A degree on a renowned institution can compensate, for example, the lack of experience.
  • Furthermore, during the study years a person can also build their own network with other students and professors.
  • The friendships made in college can be extremely useful on the professional life.
  • Above all, at least in my opinion, is use the diploma as a skill needed to reach some bigger objective.
  • A man who always dreamed about be a doctor and save lives can only accomplish his wishes by attending a college.
  • A girl who wish be an environmental lawyer can only fight for the planet if she had a lawyer degree.
  • Those are just a few reasons why a young student should attend a college, despite the price of tuitions and fees are always raising, many people keep following this path.

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    • A small business owner who went to the business school have more chance to understand and interpret signals of the market than someone who just decide open a cafeteria and do not understand too much about management, logistics or micro and micro economics.
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    • Although, in these days, we can find information about almost everything for free in the internet, colleges and universities continue offering an outstanding quality of education.
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    • Those are just a few reasons why a young student should attend a college, despite the price of tuitions and fees are always raising, many people keep following this path.Attend a college or a university seems a good option for many people because a degree can open many doors in someone's life.
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    • A small business owner who went to the business school have more chance to understand and interpret signals of the market than someone who just decide open a cafeteria and do not understand too much about management, logistics or micro and micro economics.
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    • Although, in these days, we can find information about almost everything for free in the internet, colleges and universities continue offering an outstanding quality of education.
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    • Those are just a few reasons why a young student should attend a college, despite the price of tuitions and fees are always raising, many people keep following this path.
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