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Letter 5.
Yesterday I bought English book so I can red the the text and learn language.
When I vas in biblioteca I saw my old frends from high school.
She works in famous company, who sell cosmetics.
Her job is brand manager and make order from Germany.
She speks very good germany.
She said that job is very interesting.

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- Letter 5.
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句子 1
- Yesterday I bought English book so I can red the the text and learn language.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- When I vas in biblioteca I saw my old frends from high school.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- She works in famous company, who sell cosmetics.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Her job is brand manager and make order from Germany.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- She speks very good germany.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- She said that job is very interesting.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6