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  • The best things in life are free

  • Some people think that the best things in life are free.
  • Others believe that money can buy everything.
  • In my opinion, people should remember that money is not the most valuable thing in life.
  • Indeed, if you do not want to be lonely, you should have friends.
  • Friendship is one of the most important things in our life. It is free.
  • You can have a lot of friends and no money.
  • But you can a lot of money and no friends.
  • Moreover, nobody can buy love.
  • Love is one of the best things in life.
  • It does not depend on the availability of money.
  • Some opponents might say that money can buy people happiness and health. It is true.
  • You can pay for the expensive treatment of the deadly disease.
  • Money can make you happy because you can buy everything that you want.
  • However, I disagree with these contentions.
  • If you have a beloved person, you are happy now.
  • If you are in difficult situation, friends will help you with money or something else.
  • To sum it up, I want to say that peopke should not underestimate the importance of love and friendship in life.

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