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  • School leavers should take a gap year

  • Nowadays, most teenagers take a gap year before entering university.
  • Some people think that it can be useful for their future life, while others claim that it can lead to disastrous consequences.
  • In my opinion, taking a gap year help school leavers in their future life.
  • Firstly, if you take a gap year, ypu can have an opportunity for relaxing from studying.
  • You can travel around the world, learn foreign languages and start doing something new.
  • Secondly, during a gap year youth can find a job.
  • It will give them a great chance to get a better job after the university because they will have work experience.
  • Finally, if you do not decide on your future career, taking a gap year can be useful in solving this question.
  • However, some people believe that taking a gap year does not have any advantages.
  • In their view, it can prevent the admission to the university.
  • During a gap year the rules of entering the university can change, and you cannot get into the university.
  • However, I disagree with the above opinion.
  • I am convinced that a state always gives schoolleavers the opportunity for entering the university despite the changing in the rules of admission to the university.
  • In conclusion, I believe that school leavers should use a chance to taking a gap year because it has a lot of advantages.

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