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  • Sugary drinks

  • Government should limit the size of sugary drink containers in order to improve public health It is a common knowledge that, nowadays, people consume a lot of sugary drinks.
  • Some people think that government should restrict their size in order to improve public health, while others claim that it can lead to different other problems.
  • In my opinion, the establishment of consumption rates of sweet drinks is necessary for maintenance and strengthening of public health.
  • Firstly, the consumption of sugary drinks is one of the reasons of obesity.
  • The limitation of their size can help people to solve and prevent this problem.
  • Secondly, people, who drink a lot of sweet beverages, often hepave sugar diabetes.
  • This disease can lead to very adverse consequences like blindness and disability.
  • However, some people believe that the restriction of the size of sugary drinks can lead toa lot of economics problems.
  • In their view, producers of sweet beverages willmake a great loss if government limits the size of sweet drinks.
  • It can decrease income of a state because the taxes from these enterprises will decrease to reduction of their profit.
  • However, I disagree with the above opinion.
  • I am convinced that companys can produce more useful products than sweet drinks for persons' health like compot and juice.
  • In conclusion, l believe that the improvement of public health should be one if the most important tasks of the state.

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