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Texto de riichard_c - English

  • I had a date with someone

  • Well, I wore my best suit to meet someone who I contacted by Facebook, well, she lives close to my house, however, I didn't meet her.
  • I went to her house and she looks at me and she I asked to enter to her house and I said of course after that I felt some nervous so I asked to take seat after a few minutes she delivered me a big plate of food.
  • I spent all the night with her, after a week I come back to her house but this time she looked some strange , she doesn't even was kind with me. that fact was like someone sticks a knife in my heart so I asked to her why does she have that behavior toward me , she answered that had reconciled with her ex-boyfriend , I picked my cap and left her house

POR FAVOR, ¡AYUDA A CORREGIR CADA ORACIÓN! - English

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    • I went to her house and she looks at me and she I asked to enter to her house and I said of course after that I felt some nervous so I asked to take seat after a few minutes she delivered me a big plate of food.
      ¡Vota ahora!
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 2¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 2
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    • I spent all the night with her, after a week I come back to her house but this time she looked some strange , she doesn't even was kind with me. that fact was like someone sticks a knife in my heart so I asked to her why does she have that behavior toward me , she answered that had reconciled with her ex-boyfriend , I picked my cap and left her house
      ¡Vota ahora!
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 3¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 3