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My first entry(:
Hi!
I'm Darina and I want to tell you something about my school.
Frankly speaking it's not the best school in the world (and sometimes I think it's the worst).
But I really love it, becouse it's the place where I spent all my childhood and where I've got a lot of good friends.
And, honestly, sometimes we can change the most boring lesson into Disneyland(:

DarinkkaMarch 2013투표하세요!
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- My first entry(:
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문장 1
- Hi!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I'm Darina and I want to tell you something about my school.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Frankly speaking it's not the best school in the world (and sometimes I think it's the worst).
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- But I really love it, becouse it's the place where I spent all my childhood and where I've got a lot of good friends.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- And, honestly, sometimes we can change the most boring lesson into Disneyland(:
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5