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  • My favorite group is Bts.I discovered them a year ago.My sister showed me their MVs and shows.I felt in love with theirs song 'Dope' and "I need u".I interested with them and then I became their fan.My favorite member is V.His real name is Kim Taehyung.He is really cute and cool.I love other members too,cause each of them has their own charm.On 13 of February it will their comeback.I am looking it forward.I hope they will win a lot of trophies.Because they are really hard-working.Bangtan Boys,love ya

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    • My favorite group is Bts.I discovered them a year ago.My sister showed me their MVs and shows.I felt in love with theirs song 'Dope' and "I need u".I interested with them and then I became their fan.My favorite member is V.His real name is Kim Taehyung.He is really cute and cool.I love other members too,cause each of them has their own charm.On 13 of February it will their comeback.I am looking it forward.I hope they will win a lot of trophies.Because they are really hard-working.Bangtan Boys,love ya
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