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My latest trip
Hey everyone.
I want to share with you my last trip.
I am from guatemala, Central America.
So, here we have a place called Huehuetenango it is an "departamento", (kind of an State for those who are from the US).
So i visited Huehuetenago and it was a lovely trip.
I went with my entire family, my dad, mom and sister...I have two sister, one older than me and one youger than me.
I love all my family and this trip was unique, I will never forget it.
So this is my little experience.
Hope you can point out my mistakes and help me to grow in this beautiful leanguage. Good bye.

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- My latest trip
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hey everyone.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I want to share with you my last trip.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I am from guatemala, Central America.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- So, here we have a place called Huehuetenango it is an "departamento", (kind of an State for those who are from the US).
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- So i visited Huehuetenago and it was a lovely trip.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- I went with my entire family, my dad, mom and sister...I have two sister, one older than me and one youger than me.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- I love all my family and this trip was unique, I will never forget it.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- So this is my little experience.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- Hope you can point out my mistakes and help me to grow in this beautiful leanguage. Good bye.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9