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Hi my name is Giorgia
I live in Italy but I come from Albania.
I have three sisters and I'm the oldest. my hobbies are dancing,running, watching television and reading novels.
I also love doing shopping, and I think I'm quiet good at it.
Now I'm very happy because I'm at home and not at school thanks to the Christmas holidays.
I hope to find new friends here that can help me to improve my skills in English.
Yesterday I was in a concert with all my family.

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- Hi my name is Giorgia
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- I live in Italy but I come from Albania.
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câu 2
- I have three sisters and I'm the oldest. my hobbies are dancing,running, watching television and reading novels.
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câu 3
- I also love doing shopping, and I think I'm quiet good at it.
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câu 4
- Now I'm very happy because I'm at home and not at school thanks to the Christmas holidays.
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câu 5
- I hope to find new friends here that can help me to improve my skills in English.
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- Yesterday I was in a concert with all my family.
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