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A good friend
I'm lucky beacause I have a very good friend.
He's 17 and his name is Jack.
He's from London, in Engand.
He has short black hair and beautiful blue eyes.
He's very funny and intelligent, he loves swimming, watching TV and reading hourse but he hates reading books and cooking.
I like him beaucause he makes me laught in every moment!

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- A good friend
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句子 1
- I'm lucky beacause I have a very good friend.
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句子 2
- He's 17 and his name is Jack.
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句子 3
- He's from London, in Engand.
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句子 4
- He has short black hair and beautiful blue eyes.
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句子 5
- He's very funny and intelligent, he loves swimming, watching TV and reading hourse but he hates reading books and cooking.
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句子 6
- I like him beaucause he makes me laught in every moment!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6