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  • This letter is writing to support Ms. Minyan LI, a promising young lady, to pursue further education.
  • Minyan had been studying for four years in Marine Technology at our college since Sep. 2008.
  • The student performed well during school time and comprehensively improved her overall skills.
  • As Minyan’s head teacher for four years, I’m really appreciated her personalities and passion in participating in different extracurricular activities.
  • During the four years, she had assisted me in managing the class and organizing various student activities, which was very impressive.
  • For example, she helped to organize the monthly youth league meetings and showed her creativity in organizing programs such as pantomime, music performance, etc. Besides, she is a very independent and persistent girl.
  • In daily life, she was well-organized and did well in time management.
  • As for as I know, she insisted in practicing Chinese zither everyday and also participated in many performances.
  • In terms of personalities, Minyan is very nice and always ready to help others in need.
  • She is very popular among her peers for her easy-going personalities and optimistic life attitudes.
  • Overall, Minyan is a promising student and I am pleased to recommend her to your university for further education.
  • I am certain that she will try her utmost to realize her dream and develop herself in a more comprehensive way.
  • If you need further information about Ms. LI, please do not hesitate to contact me.

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    • As Minyan’s head teacher for four years, I’m really appreciated her personalities and passion in participating in different extracurricular activities.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • During the four years, she had assisted me in managing the class and organizing various student activities, which was very impressive.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • For example, she helped to organize the monthly youth league meetings and showed her creativity in organizing programs such as pantomime, music performance, etc. Besides, she is a very independent and persistent girl.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • As for as I know, she insisted in practicing Chinese zither everyday and also participated in many performances.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Overall, Minyan is a promising student and I am pleased to recommend her to your university for further education.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • I am certain that she will try her utmost to realize her dream and develop herself in a more comprehensive way.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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