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Text from tawe4ka - English

  • a good day

  • a good day a good day I had a good day yesterday.I spent it in pleasent fuss.I went to the shopping and was buying presents with my friends.Then I turned back at home and my friends came to me.We were cooking when my sister arrived.She bought presents for us.The presents were wonderful,funny and very unexpected.We passed the time very amusing.I hope that such a days will be more often...

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • a good day a good day I had a good day yesterday.I spent it in pleasent fuss.I went to the shopping and was buying presents with my friends.Then I turned back at home and my friends came to me.We were cooking when my sister arrived.She bought presents for us.The presents were wonderful,funny and very unexpected.We passed the time very amusing.I hope that such a days will be more often...
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