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  • Winter

  • A grey and almost ghostly town that the snow sometimes dresses in white, a white cloth that heals, comforts and makes landscapes brighter.
  • And here I am, on holidays at home.
  • In this place I used to call “my place”.
  • That town that saw me growing up and escape.
  • La Chaux-de-Fonds, 1000 meters of altitude in the chilliness of the swiss mountains, 15 minutes from the French border.
  • Empty streets and icy pavements.
  • My childhood… Back to the roots.
  • I’ve just spent two weeks of cold, meeting with my people, family dinners, snow that I hadn’t seen for so long, rediscovering of all these places I used to like so much.
  • My first Christmas with my family in two years. It is nice.
  • It seems strange.
  • Everything changes.
  • I’ve learnt that going away also means burying the past.
  • That even if you think everything will be the same when you come back, you’ll never find things as you left them.
  • So you learn how to enjoy the present time, live today as if it was your last day and enjoy every snowflake.
  • Now it’s time to move on, but without forgetting what made you.
  • Thanks little Switzerland, my country, the one I know and understand like no other…

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