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Κείμενο από rangdong27 - English

  • The first day I went to school

  • Every autumn, seeing leaves falling, I remember my first day at school when I was six years old.
  • That was a cold, foggy morning.
  • My mother took my hand, walking along the village road.
  • On the trees, birds were singing.
  • On the sky, there were silver clouds.
  • The sun was rising from the mountains.
  • A new day, a new period of my life.
  • I was eager and a little worry.
  • I'd like to meet teachers and new friends, to discover the school.
  • However, it was something too strange for me.
  • So, i was anxious a bit.
  • After one hour walking, we reached the school.
  • My mother smiled at me and went back home while I was stepping through the entrance.
  • At that time, I was really scared.
  • That was the first time I was in a world so strange with strange people.
  • I cried loudly, just wanted to go back with my mother but the entrance of school was closed.
  • Suddenly, someone patted on my shoulder which startled me.
  • I swung around and saw a woman with a gentle face smiling at me.
  • Her kind eyes made me calm.
  • I smiled at her then she took me into my class.
  • It turned out that she was my head teacher.

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English