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To search a friend
hi everyone, this is the first time I write here.
I am looking for someone who could help me in English, but also a friend Uninhibited.
I would like a friend halfway around the world, it would fun

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标题
- To search a friend
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- hi everyone, this is the first time I write here.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I am looking for someone who could help me in English, but also a friend Uninhibited.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I would like a friend halfway around the world, it would fun
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3