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Tomorrow is my mother's birthday, and I have given her a day in Florence as a gift.
We have travelled with Italo train, an high speed train and we have spent 1 hours.
In Florence I have booked for her a SPA treatment with a relaxing massage and a hair tratment.
But was too cold and at 14:00 PM we decided to return in Reggio Emilia, where I live.

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- Tomorrow is my mother's birthday, and I have given her a day in Florence as a gift.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- We have travelled with Italo train, an high speed train and we have spent 1 hours.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- In Florence I have booked for her a SPA treatment with a relaxing massage and a hair tratment.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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- But was too cold and at 14:00 PM we decided to return in Reggio Emilia, where I live.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4