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A day of cross
Today was a day very important.
I an athlete, I do long cross, and today have been the corsican championship UFOLEP and it was my first cross in cadet.
We have to run 4700 meters and quickly to have a good place.
On the departure, I was seventh.
After the first turn, I was fourth.
Then, after the second turn, I was 3rd.
Finally i finished second.
A good place but I prefer 1st.
Thank you to correct this copy !

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문장 1
- Today was a day very important.
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문장 2
- I an athlete, I do long cross, and today have been the corsican championship UFOLEP and it was my first cross in cadet.
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문장 3
- We have to run 4700 meters and quickly to have a good place.
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문장 4
- On the departure, I was seventh.
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문장 5
- After the first turn, I was fourth.
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문장 6
- Then, after the second turn, I was 3rd.
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문장 7
- Finally i finished second.
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문장 8
- A good place but I prefer 1st.
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문장 9
- Thank you to correct this copy !
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