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My day
Today, I gone on gala dinner with my famyli.All was good.
The food was a perfect.But sometimes i feel so sad because all were adult and weren't my peers.
At hostess house where we been have a nice cat.The cat name is Holly.She is British breed.She is beautiful but very angry.

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문장 1
- Today, I gone on gala dinner with my famyli.All was good.
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- The food was a perfect.But sometimes i feel so sad because all were adult and weren't my peers.
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- At hostess house where we been have a nice cat.The cat name is Holly.She is British breed.She is beautiful but very angry.
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