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Text from MohamedRizk4sci - English

  • Parents are the best teachers

  • When I was child, my parents helped me to learn how to speak and walk.
  • Because I was very small, I do not remember how they taught me.
  • Till now, I still ask them when I want to take advice.
  • I am very grateful to them.
  • In my point of view, parents are the best teachers for many reasons that I will mention in the next paragraph.
  • First of all, they helped me to learn my native language.
  • And because my father is very powerful in English, he helps me till now to learn this language.
  • My father love to learn a new language.
  • He read a lot of English novels and books.
  • Secondly, when I face any problem in my live, they give me a best advice to solve this problem.
  • Moreover, they have a good experience in live; when I spend time to speak with them, I learn how to deal with my friends and colleagues.
  • Finally, my parents help me all time.
  • I thank my God (Allah) for having them.
  • I consider them as my first teachers how learn me and help me to learn everything that I know.

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