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improve my english
I really need to improve my english.
Indeed, I need to speak and write a perfect english for my work.
Nevertheless, english is not as easy as I though.
Please help me to perform. thanks.

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- improve my english
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句子 1
- I really need to improve my english.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Indeed, I need to speak and write a perfect english for my work.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Nevertheless, english is not as easy as I though.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Please help me to perform. thanks.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4