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My home
Hello!
I am Liza,I am from Russia.
I live in Omsk,there is very cold now,because it is Siberia!
There is a lot of snow,it is beautiful and amazing,but it is too much and it gives people little problems.
I love my home,there is really nice,i would like to more and more people visit my great country.
In the winter there is wonderful,and in the summer here also better,there is all is simple,but it is our country with large fab spaces and i love it all of heart.
Please,tell me about your country.What do you love in it?
Would you like come in the Russia?Do you travel a lot?

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- My home
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句子 1
- Hello!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I am Liza,I am from Russia.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I live in Omsk,there is very cold now,because it is Siberia!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- There is a lot of snow,it is beautiful and amazing,but it is too much and it gives people little problems.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I love my home,there is really nice,i would like to more and more people visit my great country.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- In the winter there is wonderful,and in the summer here also better,there is all is simple,but it is our country with large fab spaces and i love it all of heart.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- Please,tell me about your country.What do you love in it?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- Would you like come in the Russia?Do you travel a lot?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8