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Help me to correct my translation of the russian song, please=)
Icicle drowned in a glass.
It disappeared and I'm sorry for it Your eyes said me something It's getting hot because of it It snows and there is a bad weather outside the window I feel warm when you are near There are no people happier than me, believe me under gentle, tender eye.
chorus Your eyes have colour of whiskey They are so near-near to me Your eyes have a colour of happiness They will safe me from a trouble I feel drunk because you are near I drowned like an icicle in a goblet For me it was like an award, that your eyes told me There is the bad weather and slush Misfortune is walking around the world.
I feel like to cry, for some reason.
Probably it's because of my happiness

Tiêu đề
- Help me to correct my translation of the russian song, please=)
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Tiêu đề
câu 1
- Icicle drowned in a glass.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- It disappeared and I'm sorry for it Your eyes said me something It's getting hot because of it It snows and there is a bad weather outside the window I feel warm when you are near There are no people happier than me, believe me under gentle, tender eye.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- chorus Your eyes have colour of whiskey They are so near-near to me Your eyes have a colour of happiness They will safe me from a trouble I feel drunk because you are near I drowned like an icicle in a goblet For me it was like an award, that your eyes told me There is the bad weather and slush Misfortune is walking around the world.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- I feel like to cry, for some reason.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
câu 5
- Probably it's because of my happiness
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5