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Is It Right?
Hi!
My name is Lisa, I'm from Vladivostok.
I wanna learn English just for me.
Not long ago, I just realized that English is indeed an important language for life.
I also started to think about migrating to Canada.

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- Is It Right?
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句子 1
- Hi!
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句子 2
- My name is Lisa, I'm from Vladivostok.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I wanna learn English just for me.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Not long ago, I just realized that English is indeed an important language for life.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I also started to think about migrating to Canada.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5