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Talking about my day
Today I had a tired day, I prepared a slideshow for my boss, because tomorow we will have a meeting to talk about the last year.
In this meeting we will do plan of this new year.
I want to do a good apresentation.
Thank you about the correcting.

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- Talking about my day
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句子 1
- Today I had a tired day, I prepared a slideshow for my boss, because tomorow we will have a meeting to talk about the last year.
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句子 2
- In this meeting we will do plan of this new year.
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句子 3
- I want to do a good apresentation.
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句子 4
- Thank you about the correcting.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4