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..... Need Improvement.....
At last I've got to know that my English is very weak .I'm quite embarrased.The think that makes my english so poor is inattentiveness.My mind says something and I write something.This makes me feel embarrased .
Please if anyone out here can help me to improve my English I'd be really glad .You can take it as a language exchange or may be one sided cause everyone here know French.But, if anyone is interested to learn French than He/She is kindly invited.I know my way of writing is so poor but I wanted it to be improved.
I'm also interested to learn some slangs,new words,etc,.It'll help me a lot in future.
I'm eagerly waiting for a English native speaker .... ..... Thanks ;)

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- ..... Need Improvement.....
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - Başlık
cümle 1
- At last I've got to know that my English is very weak .I'm quite embarrased.The think that makes my english so poor is inattentiveness.My mind says something and I write something.This makes me feel embarrased .
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1
cümle 2
- Please if anyone out here can help me to improve my English I'd be really glad .You can take it as a language exchange or may be one sided cause everyone here know French.But, if anyone is interested to learn French than He/She is kindly invited.I know my way of writing is so poor but I wanted it to be improved.
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 2
cümle 3
- I'm also interested to learn some slangs,new words,etc,.It'll help me a lot in future.
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
cümle 4
- I'm eagerly waiting for a English native speaker .... ..... Thanks ;)
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4