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However, if a museum covers educational and entertained areas, it would have a wider impact on young generations.
This because museums are regarded as a good relexation and rather than boring places by young people.
Parents are also likely to choose to visit museums as family atctivity, as their chilred would enjoy the atmosphere there.
This conbination can help museums to raise the profile on young people.

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- However, if a museum covers educational and entertained areas, it would have a wider impact on young generations.
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- This because museums are regarded as a good relexation and rather than boring places by young people.
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- Parents are also likely to choose to visit museums as family atctivity, as their chilred would enjoy the atmosphere there.
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- This conbination can help museums to raise the profile on young people.
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