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Text from Jikushi - English

  • Scary night

  • Yesterday, I was in my friend's house whatching some horror history videos, or commonly called "Creepypastas".
  • There are a lot of them, but there was one who's called "School stuff that you musn't know", so I said "I want see it, it'll be interesting", so then we watched it.
  • A few minutes later, my friend named Ignacio (commonly called Nacho) went to the kitchen to pick up something to eat, and at that moment I went so quickly and silently and I frighten him with a loud scream, poor Nacho, he was pallid.

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    • There are a lot of them, but there was one who's called "School stuff that you musn't know", so I said "I want see it, it'll be interesting", so then we watched it.
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    • A few minutes later, my friend named Ignacio (commonly called Nacho) went to the kitchen to pick up something to eat, and at that moment I went so quickly and silently and I frighten him with a loud scream, poor Nacho, he was pallid.
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