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Hello !
Hello, my name is Barbara.
I would like to meet people to improve my english.
I learnt this langage during 10 years at school but I have just the base.
I will be happy to help you in french in return.

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- Hello !
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello, my name is Barbara.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I would like to meet people to improve my english.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I learnt this langage during 10 years at school but I have just the base.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I will be happy to help you in french in return.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4