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Hello!
Hi, my name's Giorgio, I'm 14 and I live in Treviso, that is a small city near Venice.
I started study english when I was six.
Treviso is a beautiful city, I travelled here 4 months ago.
Before I lived in Oderzo, a town, that was a roman city.

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- Hi, my name's Giorgio, I'm 14 and I live in Treviso, that is a small city near Venice.
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- I started study english when I was six.
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- Treviso is a beautiful city, I travelled here 4 months ago.
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- Before I lived in Oderzo, a town, that was a roman city.
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