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  • January 16th

  • Today is Wednesday, January 16th.
  • Today I felt cold all day, when I woke up, I returned the call, 'cause Xiomy said me last night :"call me when you wake up".
  • When she picked up the cell phone, she said me: "good morning dear, today we accomplish another month, kiss", I still feel very very very happy.
  • When I saw her on the bus, she got on the bus, and sat beside me, and we started to talk over us, I gave a letter, but not a normal letter, a scrapbook ball, I did last night, when she saw it, she held me.
  • Later she said me: "your present I'll give you in the afternoon and night".
  • After school, she came at my home and we made muffins, after she gave me a bracelet with her name, my name, and hearts.
  • Now, we go to the hairdressing.
  • I want cut the hair, My hairdresser, has a blond hair, she is beautiful.
  • At night, I want that Xiomy stay with me.
  • This noon in the recess she said me: "you don't must have fear, I feel very good with you, you don't must feel fear, you get a little light that lightens my way" Everybody know that I love her, 'cause in my school separated us.
  • I feel fear for that, I don't know what think or do, I feel alone in my class, although my friends try to animate me, I feel sad.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • Today I felt cold all day, when I woke up, I returned the call, 'cause Xiomy said me last night :"call me when you wake up".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • When she picked up the cell phone, she said me: "good morning dear, today we accomplish another month, kiss", I still feel very very very happy.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • When I saw her on the bus, she got on the bus, and sat beside me, and we started to talk over us, I gave a letter, but not a normal letter, a scrapbook ball, I did last night, when she saw it, she held me.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
    • After school, she came at my home and we made muffins, after she gave me a bracelet with her name, my name, and hearts.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
  • câu 8
  • câu 9
  • câu 10
    • This noon in the recess she said me: "you don't must have fear, I feel very good with you, you don't must feel fear, you get a little light that lightens my way" Everybody know that I love her, 'cause in my school separated us.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
    • I feel fear for that, I don't know what think or do, I feel alone in my class, although my friends try to animate me, I feel sad.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11