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my future profession
Today I passed my last exam.
I study in the university and I will finish my study in this year.
My future profession is top-manager.
Marketing is very interesting for me.
I want to work in advertising.

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- my future profession
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句子 1
- Today I passed my last exam.
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句子 2
- I study in the university and I will finish my study in this year.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- My future profession is top-manager.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Marketing is very interesting for me.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I want to work in advertising.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5