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Hello.
Hi, I have just finished my English courses.
Help me to improve my skills.
If someone has Aviation English knowledge or you are interested in Aviation it would be nice.
I can help with technical ( aviation) language in Russian or we can have an easy talk for various themes.)

danatasJanuary 2014赶紧投票吧！
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- Hello.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi, I have just finished my English courses.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Help me to improve my skills.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- If someone has Aviation English knowledge or you are interested in Aviation it would be nice.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I can help with technical ( aviation) language in Russian or we can have an easy talk for various themes.)
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4