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My best friend
Hi!
Today i want to talk about my best friend.
Her name is Lisa and she has my same ages.
I met her two years ago, when she arrives in my class.
I like spend time with her.
In our free time we go out toghetee or we put on nail lacquer.
In this period she is a little bit cold towards me, but i think that it's a bad period because we are oppressed by school.

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- My best friend
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- Hi!
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- Today i want to talk about my best friend.
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- Her name is Lisa and she has my same ages.
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- I met her two years ago, when she arrives in my class.
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- I like spend time with her.
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- In our free time we go out toghetee or we put on nail lacquer.
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- In this period she is a little bit cold towards me, but i think that it's a bad period because we are oppressed by school.
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