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  • Essay

  • There have always been a number of people considering that rewarding their children with extra pocket money is one of the best ways to keep them studying hard.
  • But is it true or are they just not able to see the reverse side of the issue?
  • As far as I am concerned, I believe that such a common method can bring young generations a lot of harm.
  • First of all, it may reflect on child’s behaviour and train of thought.
  • The student is likely to start thinking that he must be rewarded for whatever he does, and hence, it will make him quite mingy, greedy and mercenary.
  • What makes it worse is that, apart from that, it may mislead your children so that they cannot see the veritable purpose of their education.
  • They should comprehend that the major aim of theirs is not getting their parents’ money, but being able to gain their own one.
  • Therefore, such encouragements hinder your kids’ mind from the true conception of the matter.
  • However, there is another point of view.
  • They say that, by praising your child, it is easier to keep them under control and get from them what you want to.
  • Nevertheless, I cannot agree with that opinion since, to my mind, too much money can only corrupt a green mind and will certainly teach nothing worthy.
  • To conclude, I shall point that, according to the arguments above, it is clear: encouraging students by means of extra money is not the best way of educating, and a good parent will always find a better method while bringing his child up.

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  • câu 1
    • There have always been a number of people considering that rewarding their children with extra pocket money is one of the best ways to keep them studying hard.
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    • As far as I am concerned, I believe that such a common method can bring young generations a lot of harm.
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    • The student is likely to start thinking that he must be rewarded for whatever he does, and hence, it will make him quite mingy, greedy and mercenary.
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    • What makes it worse is that, apart from that, it may mislead your children so that they cannot see the veritable purpose of their education.
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    • They should comprehend that the major aim of theirs is not getting their parents’ money, but being able to gain their own one.
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    • They say that, by praising your child, it is easier to keep them under control and get from them what you want to.
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    • Nevertheless, I cannot agree with that opinion since, to my mind, too much money can only corrupt a green mind and will certainly teach nothing worthy.
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  • câu 12
    • To conclude, I shall point that, according to the arguments above, it is clear: encouraging students by means of extra money is not the best way of educating, and a good parent will always find a better method while bringing his child up.
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