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  • Racism in the USA, part 2

  • Even if we only watched a small extract of Mississippi Burning, we could easily understand what was the movie about: We can see a car drove by two white people, and with a black man in the back seat.
  • A few cars are chasing them before the sheriff and his assistant arrest them.
  • Even if the sheriff is from the beginning of the arrest quite antipathetic, he become really aggressive once he have seen the black man in the backseat.
  • He ends up shouting the driver, just because he was driving a black man.
  • What is really worrying about this movie is to see that even law enforcement were breaking rules and were certainly even part of the Ku Klux Klan.
  • The Ku Klux Klan is a hate group who is against Blacks, Jews, Communists and the Immigrants.
  • Even if the KKK is not as potent as it used to be, a few people die each year because of it.
  • I really think that leaving so much power to people like him is very dangerous, because after all, he is as bad as the criminals he sent to prison.
  • This work is different from the previous ones studied by its kind: A Raisin in the Sun isn’t a movie but a play, written by Lorraine Hansberry.
  • The title is a first indication to what the movie will be about: A raisin in the sun is a reference to Langston Hughes’ poem: “What happens to a dream deferred?/Does it dry up/like a raisin in the sun?”.
  • Indeed, A Raisin in the Sun is all about dream: the main character, Walter Younger, wants money to allow his family a brighter life, his sister, Bethana, wants to be a doctor, his wife, Ruth, and his mother, Mama, wants to own a house,..
  • One of the most important things that is taught in this play is that dreaming is way more important than owning a lot of things.
  • The character of Mr. Lindler shows perfectly the importance of fighting racial discrimination: he is a white man; send to the Youngers’ by a neighbourhood association to offer them a large amount of money to keep them from moving in their all-white neighbourhood.
  • By refusing, the Younger showed pride and dignity, and that’s exactly how people should deal with discrimination.

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  • Sentence 1
    • Even if we only watched a small extract of Mississippi Burning, we could easily understand what was the movie about: We can see a car drove by two white people, and with a black man in the back seat.
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    • Even if the sheriff is from the beginning of the arrest quite antipathetic, he become really aggressive once he have seen the black man in the backseat.
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    • What is really worrying about this movie is to see that even law enforcement were breaking rules and were certainly even part of the Ku Klux Klan.
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    • I really think that leaving so much power to people like him is very dangerous, because after all, he is as bad as the criminals he sent to prison.
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  • Sentence 9
    • This work is different from the previous ones studied by its kind: A Raisin in the Sun isn’t a movie but a play, written by Lorraine Hansberry.
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  • Sentence 10
    • The title is a first indication to what the movie will be about: A raisin in the sun is a reference to Langston Hughes’ poem: “What happens to a dream deferred?/Does it dry up/like a raisin in the sun?”.
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  • Sentence 11
    • Indeed, A Raisin in the Sun is all about dream: the main character, Walter Younger, wants money to allow his family a brighter life, his sister, Bethana, wants to be a doctor, his wife, Ruth, and his mother, Mama, wants to own a house,..
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  • Sentence 13
    • The character of Mr. Lindler shows perfectly the importance of fighting racial discrimination: he is a white man; send to the Youngers’ by a neighbourhood association to offer them a large amount of money to keep them from moving in their all-white neighbourhood.
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