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How and when use the computer at home ?
I use my computer to homework to shool.
I play videos games with my friends.
I go also on Facebook to communicate with my friends and my correspondent.
My Mother use the computer to her work and she's go to Facebook to communicate with her friands.
My stepfather use also the computer to his work.
Can you Help me to correct my text please ?
I thanks you everybody !!!

MichelPetreJanuary 2014Bầu chọn ngay!
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- How and when use the computer at home ?
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câu 1
- I use my computer to homework to shool.
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câu 2
- I play videos games with my friends.
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câu 3
- I go also on Facebook to communicate with my friends and my correspondent.
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câu 4
- My Mother use the computer to her work and she's go to Facebook to communicate with her friands.
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câu 5
- My stepfather use also the computer to his work.
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câu 6
- Can you Help me to correct my text please ?
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câu 7
- I thanks you everybody !!!
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7