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Hi!
Hi guys!
I'm Raffaella, I'm 18 years and I'm from Turin, in north Italy.
I'm a student, I study Photography and Cinematography and luckily this is my last year.
However, I'm here 'cause I want to improve my English, and why not, for make new friendships! What else? See you! :)

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- I'm Raffaella, I'm 18 years and I'm from Turin, in north Italy.
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- I'm a student, I study Photography and Cinematography and luckily this is my last year.
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- However, I'm here 'cause I want to improve my English, and why not, for make new friendships! What else? See you! :)
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