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Hi, i'd like to improve my english.
I haven't time to make an english course in a private school, and i don't want to use my money to learn english.
I'm always been an autodidact, learning english listening and translating songs, reading books, watching moovies in original language.
But i've lost most of the fluently I had, so i'm trying to brush up my english.
thanks to anyone will help me. Bye

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