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I miss my puppies
A month ago, my dog have 4 puppies and I was so happy.
Not only because the puppies, otherwise it was the first time that she get pregnant.
But yesterday, my mother gift 3 of them and now I'm so sad, i really miss my little babies.

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- A month ago, my dog have 4 puppies and I was so happy.
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- Not only because the puppies, otherwise it was the first time that she get pregnant.
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- But yesterday, my mother gift 3 of them and now I'm so sad, i really miss my little babies.
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