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my trip to Brazil
In january, I went to Brazil to spend my vacations with friends.
The experience was amazing.
Brazil is a beatiful country.
Its beaches, music, people, culture, food and drink are great.
I want to live there!

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- my trip to Brazil
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句子 1
- In january, I went to Brazil to spend my vacations with friends.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- The experience was amazing.
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句子 3
- Brazil is a beatiful country.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Its beaches, music, people, culture, food and drink are great.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I want to live there!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5