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Text from Mialee - English

  • Essay

  • New media is increasing influential because some reasons and I consider this trend benefits the massive despite its downwards.
  • It is important to read and watch news because the world is driven by technologies at an incredible pace.
  • People feel the need to keep in date through internet or via televisions.
  • For example, it is easier for a businessman to make an optimum investment after noticing the last policy of government and the information related to his field.
  • News media has an great effect on our opinions to the world, widening our horizon and even bringing us with new approaches to solve problems.
  • Knowing a wide variety of issues happened domestically and internationally, our mind may accept and adopt different mode of thinking and this means we are more likely to analysis issues in global prospective.
  • As a result, more reasonable choices would be made in our daily life, because we try to tackle problems in an innovational method.
  • Though it is regarded objective attitude as the key to news, we found sometimes news contains biased opinions, which would mislead our view to certain group.
  • For example, after the publishment of news that teachers forced students to participate in evening self-study in China, the public normally hold the opinion that high school’s teachers only care about scores and the admission rate.
  • The consequent is that people would develop and deepen that prejudice and unlikely to beat barriers.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frazo 1
    • New media is increasing influential because some reasons and I consider this trend benefits the massive despite its downwards.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • For example, it is easier for a businessman to make an optimum investment after noticing the last policy of government and the information related to his field.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • News media has an great effect on our opinions to the world, widening our horizon and even bringing us with new approaches to solve problems.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • Knowing a wide variety of issues happened domestically and internationally, our mind may accept and adopt different mode of thinking and this means we are more likely to analysis issues in global prospective.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • As a result, more reasonable choices would be made in our daily life, because we try to tackle problems in an innovational method.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • Though it is regarded objective attitude as the key to news, we found sometimes news contains biased opinions, which would mislead our view to certain group.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • For example, after the publishment of news that teachers forced students to participate in evening self-study in China, the public normally hold the opinion that high school’s teachers only care about scores and the admission rate.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10