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hi, folks Im starting to do a personal diary, to test my english and learn more and more.
I will post it daily, so I will need a hard help from you. Bye

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句子 1
- hi, folks Im starting to do a personal diary, to test my english and learn more and more.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
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- I will post it daily, so I will need a hard help from you. Bye
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2