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My closed friend!
I have two closed friends.
Julie live in Hoc Chi Minh city, and Rubi live in Binh Duong province.
Their character is different.
Julie is bravery, confidence, fashion and hard.
Rubi is gentle and sophistication but sometimes, she is so stubborn.
And they have some common: knowledge.
Their words very sharp.

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- My closed friend!
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- I have two closed friends.
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문장 2
- Julie live in Hoc Chi Minh city, and Rubi live in Binh Duong province.
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- Their character is different.
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- Julie is bravery, confidence, fashion and hard.
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문장 5
- Rubi is gentle and sophistication but sometimes, she is so stubborn.
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문장 6
- And they have some common: knowledge.
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- Their words very sharp.
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