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Today
Today we are Wednesday, the 5th of Februar 2014.
My radio rangs at seven o'clock but I woke up earlier than the other days and I don't know why ...
I brokefast and went to school with my sister and a friend.
I took the bus and about eight o'clock, I arrived to my school.
From eight thirteen to midday, I learnt a lot of things.
Then, I ate and I leave this place.
Now, I'm at house and I'm writing this text to improve my grammar and my vocabulary.
I know this text is long and maybe with a lot of mistakes but please, be brave and correct me ..
I would like to go in England about one year when I will have finish the college so .. help me ! Thank you ..

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- Today
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Sentence 1
- Today we are Wednesday, the 5th of Februar 2014.
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Sentence 2
- My radio rangs at seven o'clock but I woke up earlier than the other days and I don't know why ...
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Sentence 3
- I brokefast and went to school with my sister and a friend.
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- I took the bus and about eight o'clock, I arrived to my school.
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- From eight thirteen to midday, I learnt a lot of things.
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- Then, I ate and I leave this place.
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- Now, I'm at house and I'm writing this text to improve my grammar and my vocabulary.
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- I know this text is long and maybe with a lot of mistakes but please, be brave and correct me ..
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Sentence 9
- I would like to go in England about one year when I will have finish the college so .. help me ! Thank you ..
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