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Hello!
Now first day when i study english.
I write very bad! i dont know english.
I know some words of english.
But I wont stady very good. About myself.
I m girl, I live and study in Moscow.
My name is Mayya :) he-he, and.... good night.... spokoinoi nochi ( this on russian)).

-Mayya-February 2014赶紧投票吧！
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- Hello!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Now first day when i study english.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I write very bad! i dont know english.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I know some words of english.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- But I wont stady very good. About myself.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I m girl, I live and study in Moscow.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- My name is Mayya :) he-he, and.... good night.... spokoinoi nochi ( this on russian)).
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6