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Text from Juldyro - English

  • Miracle

  • As I promised myself to write everyday in English, I'm going to keep my word.
  • Today I had a lack of motivation, but I decided not give in to the weakness.
  • Today I'm going to tell you about my mother's adventure.
  • Yesterday my mother went to meet her parents.
  • She wanted to show them new-opened shopping center.
  • She went to pick them from their house.
  • She left the car and went upstairs to the flat where they live.
  • While they were coming down, my mother noticed that she didn't have the car's key.
  • She got into the panic and threw out all her stuff from her bag.
  • She couldn't find it, then my grandmother saw that she had left her key in the ignition lock.
  • The key was slammed in the car.
  • What my mum did was to calling my father.
  • He told her to calm down.
  • He promised her to bring spare key and he let her come back to flat.
  • My mum left car with key in the ignition lock for one hour, and nobody had stolen it.
  • That's what I call miracle!

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