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Text from simoon67 - English

  • Believe me.

  • She was so angry with me Sir.
  • She wouldn't believe to me anymore.
  • She is still so mad because she is too much jealous about me, she love me so much.
  • It was because she found that letter of my neighborhood into the trash, it was not so important for me.
  • In that letter there was the complain about the annoying noise during the nights before she returned back to home from her travel for work.
  • Sir, I said to her the noise it was from the television programs in the late nights, I fall asleep during all those nights with the television turned on on not proper so good programs.
  • I know I know, it is so strange to explain all that, but, believe me, after she started for the one week job travel around their new market I was so depressed.
  • It was a good opportunity for her business, a really great opportunity for her company too.
  • In that time, as I said, I fall so depressed, so I decided to buy a television and a play station to watch some video and to play some video game to get some good time watching some programs or playing some video games.
  • It was just to let feel me better, better than what was and what is now my new bad mood.
  • Some time I had notice that the neighborhood was looking at me because the noise, so I'm not surprised now about all this mess.
  • However, then, so, after that mess I decided to turn back the television to the shop because I found that it was not a good idea to spend my time watching Television.
  • But it was impossible, they wouldn't get it back.
  • So, I really don't know why, but I decided to make a gift to the my best wife's friend that she come to visit me several times in the late evening, and it was just to learn how to use the the remote control and overall the joystick to play some games together. What you said?
  • Oh please, believe me.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • In that letter there was the complain about the annoying noise during the nights before she returned back to home from her travel for work.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5
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    • Sir, I said to her the noise it was from the television programs in the late nights, I fall asleep during all those nights with the television turned on on not proper so good programs.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6
  • Vakya 7
    • I know I know, it is so strange to explain all that, but, believe me, after she started for the one week job travel around their new market I was so depressed.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 7
  • Vakya 8
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    • In that time, as I said, I fall so depressed, so I decided to buy a television and a play station to watch some video and to play some video game to get some good time watching some programs or playing some video games.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9
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    • Some time I had notice that the neighborhood was looking at me because the noise, so I'm not surprised now about all this mess.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 11
  • Vakya 12
    • However, then, so, after that mess I decided to turn back the television to the shop because I found that it was not a good idea to spend my time watching Television.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 12
  • Vakya 13
  • Vakya 14
    • So, I really don't know why, but I decided to make a gift to the my best wife's friend that she come to visit me several times in the late evening, and it was just to learn how to use the the remote control and overall the joystick to play some games together. What you said?
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 14
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